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Seth S.
4/4/2017 03:33:39 pm
These poems are cool. I like the topic of food! The endings are dramatic, too. MAKE MORE!
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Drew Aker
4/4/2017 04:17:56 pm
made me hungry
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Callie E
4/4/2017 03:41:34 pm
Lots of crunchy foods.That was a cool poem.
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cash
4/4/2017 03:53:35 pm
i like all thouse foods
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jacob
4/4/2017 03:53:53 pm
it sounds like a yum yum yum song
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demarcus
4/4/2017 03:56:30 pm
Sometimes I get hangry when i'm hungry.
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person
4/4/2017 03:59:46 pm
lots of onomatopia
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elizabeth
4/4/2017 04:13:36 pm
Yum, Yum... I'm hungry!
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Grayson
4/4/2017 04:15:51 pm
It is really good
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Ansur X. Riera-Vales #22 3rd Grade
4/4/2017 04:19:42 pm
I really liked the way you used the Onomatopoeia. The poem really made me hungry. (Rumble Rumble...) :)
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Ballie L
4/4/2017 04:22:20 pm
Made me hungry. this is me everyday after school
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TJ from last year:)
4/4/2017 04:24:35 pm
i am always hungry... i agree with both poems.
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Derek and Navya
10/6/2017 07:47:10 am
Makes us hungry the poems have alot of details and onomatopea.
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SamL
10/6/2017 07:50:50 am
I absolutely love this poem. you have a gift for making people hungry.
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